When the Doctor invents a machine to predict the future, he sees the death of himself and Jo at the hands of the Brigadier. Deciding that separating is the best way to avoid this fate, Jo is sent on assignment to Africa where she discovers a deadly threat is hiding in the desert.
Jo Grant, the Brigadier, Mike Yates, Sergeant Benton.
Pg 38 The TARDIS is inside the Doctor's lab at UNIT HQ when the story begins.
Pg 69 Inside the Doctor's laboratory, UNIT HQ.
Pg 21 "Since he got the dematerialization circuit back you two have spent more time away from UNIT then you've spent here." The Doctor got this back in The Three Doctors.
"If anything like the Nestenes of Axons came again" Spearhead from Space/Terror of the Autons, The Claws of Axos.
Pg 22 "If he put some kind of phone in the TARDIS - or some way of leaving a message -" This is a reference to the space/time telegraph the Doctor eventually leaves for the Brigadier, seen in Revenge of the Cybermen and Terror of the Zygons.
Pg 26 "The projection is based on a formula given to me by a friend of mine on Venus, many years ago." Venusian Lullaby.
Pg 55 "But Benton only grinned. 'Rank Hath Its Privileges, sir.'" Reference to Day of the Daleks, although Mike says "Has" there.
Pg 56 "She tried to tell herself that being arrested on Earth, even in a strange country, was hardly likely to be as dangerous as Spiridon under the Daleks, or Solos." Planet of the Daleks, The Mutants.
Pg 60 "'The cybermen?' hazarded Catriona. 'Oh no. They were Daleks. Well, Daleks and Ogrons. You see there was this alternative future, and the Doctor -" Day of the Daleks. Catriona's knowledge of the Cybermen is from The Invasion.
Pg 61 "Well first there were the Nestenes, and their plastic things, the Autons. Then there were the Axons, the Daemons, Ogrons, Daleks, Methaji, Arcturians, Sea Devils, Ice Warriors, Draconians, Hoveet, Skraals, Solonians - and -umm - Kalekani and Venusians, though I've never really met the Venusians but the Doctor talks about them all the time - and then if you count things like the Drashigs - oh and the Spiridons of course, that was only last week, except that you can't see them because they're invisible -" In order: Terror of the Autons, The Claws of Axos, The Daemons, Day of the Daleks, an unrecorded adventure, The Curse of Peladon, The Sea Devils, The Curse of Peladon again, Frontier in Space, two unrecorded adventures, The Mutants, an unrecorded adventure, the Doctor met Venusians in Venusian Lullaby, Planet of the Daleks. This is a worthy attempt to expand the gaps a little, although Jo doesn't mention Verdigris or the Careshi (Verdigris and The Suns of Caresh, respectively), for obvious reasons. Tellingly, however, she also doesn't mention alien races we do know about, such as Alpha Centaurans, the Peladonians, Aggedor, the Uxarians, the Keller machine etc. We can put her various omissions down to the sheer length of the list, but it's quite a clever piece on Paul Leonard's part.
Pg 74 "These were people, people, not Autons or Daleks or Ogrons." Terror of the Autons, Day of the Daleks.
Pg 79 "I did over seventy thousand hours on a Martian Exploder a couple of centuries ago." This might be on the Mars-Jupiter run, for which the Doctor is a qualified pilot, as mentioned in Robot.
Pg 134 "Despite its apparently crude construction, the mound was larger and more impressive than, for example, the Axon spaceship - and that had caused enough trouble." The Claws of Axos.
Pg 184 "The Venusians, I seem to remember, had a system of hand-signals which many of their cultures used almost exclusively for intimate conversation. The clan Dhallenidhall in particular thought it was quite rude to speak aloud. Except in an emergency, of course. And then there are the Delphons, who communicate by means of eyebrow movements." Venusians were seen in Venusian Lullaby and Delphons were first mentioned in Spearhead from Space.
Pg 190 "Famous novelist, six and six" Graham Greene, later to appear in The Turing Test, also by Paul Leonard.
Pg 254 "Her eyes only showed a blurry view of an amber surface, rather like the Probe 9 pictures of Mars." The Ambassadors of Death.
Pg 273 Reference to Sontarans.
OLD FRIENDS AND OLD ENEMIES
Pg 22 Sergeant Osgood. Appeared in The Daemons and lots of novels since.
NEW FRIENDS AND NEW ENEMIES
Sakir Mohammad, Tahir.
A Xarax turns up briefly on page 17 of The Dark Path, in one the greatest continuity cock-ups of all-time.
- Pg 272 "Jo suddenly remembered Catriona. Catriona who'd given her life so that Jo could get away. She realized she hadn't even thought of the woman since it had happened." This isn't true, as she actually mentions Catriona to the Doctor just three pages earlier (page 269).
PLUGGING THE HOLES [Fan-wank theorizing of how to fix continuity cock-ups]
- Jo was clearly speaking without thinking, so technically that didn't count.
FEATURED ALIEN RACES
Pg 253 The Xarax, insects the size of hippopotami, with three-foot long mandibles, whose bodily fluid is honey. They can impersonate all manner of people (quite well) and machines (not as well - their attempt at a helicopter is seen on the front cover, although to be fair they're not as concerned with disguise at that point). They're essentially a biological tool kit (page 276) and some of their forms include:
Pg 143 Defenders, tank-like insects with armoured bodies, stumpy legs and forward-sloping heads.
Pg 250 Spider-like weaver units.
Pg 273 A being that looks like a huge hexagonal nut. It's black and shiny and attached to cables, with a tiny shuttered eye and a slightly larger pair of jaws at the top of each section.
Pg 7 The (fictional) state of Kebiria, the 1970s. It's renamed at the end, but we don't find out the new name.
Pg 20 UNIT HQ and surroundings.
Pg 265 The USS Eisenhower.
Various transport planes and helicopters, including some which are Xarax imitations.
IN SUMMARY - Robert Smith?
This is the classic Paul Leonard novel: a gripping premise, aliens with more detail than you could possibly imagine, some startling visual imagery... and an ending so lazy you're convinced he had a brain haemorrhage two thirds of the way through. The nation of Kebiria still stands up today and the characterisation of the regulars is quite good indeed. But the nose-dive the plot takes towards the end is sheer awfulness writ large, with pointless scenes of soldiery, clones that don't fool anyone and a denouement that involves the Doctor pulling some wires out of a wall. This is a real tragedy, given how good the early parts were. Unfortunately, it won't be the last time.